Alongside our world
is another, a spirit world of the American Indians, where the white man hasn’t
destroyed the herds of buffalo and where the Indian tribes live in much the
same way they have existed for centuries.
There is a link
between the worlds but it is rarely used, and for those who find it the
consequences may be terrifying. Showing disrespect to an Indian in our world
may be enough, if the spirits agree, and the perpetrator of the disrespect will
find himself or herself transported to the other world with no hope of return,
and forced to become a slave to the tribes of the other world.
So it was for Kayla
and her two friends. Although her Indian boyfriend stole from her, breaking up
their relationship was enough to condemn Kayla. The young man’s grandmother
wanted revenge on Kayla, and soon the three young women were facing a lifetime of
pain, sexual torment and punishment at the hands of the warriors of the Wehali
tribe in the other world. Even so, there was something about the muscle-bound
warriors that was both arousing and exciting, and perhaps the spirits were
trying to map a future for the girls and for the Wehali tribe that no one could
possibly have foretold.
Aubrey finished
collecting eggs from different nests of hay. She turned to leave the barn, and
froze. A half naked man stood in the doorway. She watched his long black hair
and the fringe on his pants waving in the breeze. His black stare silently
followed her path around the barn. His eyes were alert, and Aubrey thought that
he was waiting to see if she would scream or run.
Oh, shit. Oh, shit.
Be calm. Clara told us what to do. She gripped the basket with both hands to
try to keep from shaking. “I think Henry and Clara are in the house.” Aubrey
tried to sound casual, but her mouth and throat were dry and she sounded
hoarse. She put her head down so he could not see the fear in her eyes, and
brushed by him to walk to the cabin. Her knees were knocking and she had to
force herself not to run and to walk at a normal pace.
Kayla and Cici had
been peeling vegetables, but they had both put their knives on the table. Clara
had warned them about holding weapons if the Indians showed up. The men were
spread out and leaning against the wall with the door. The Indian from the barn
had followed Aubrey back, and he stopped in the open doorway.
Nashoba and his men
had walked in without knocking. He stood in the center of the room, and his men
automatically spread along the wall offering escape. He sent Ahiga to see if
anyone was in one of the outbuildings. If someone in the cabin caused a commotion,
the missing captive would not have time to try to hide.
Nashoba’s flashing
black eyes studied the two girls at the table. They were trying to look calm,
but there was fear and strain on their faces. He was looking at the cow and the
one with raven hair. She was pretty, and his cock stirred slightly at the thought
of keeping her. He wondered if the one that was missing would be the true
raven.
A golden haired girl
walked into the cabin with a basket clenched in her hands and Ahiga following
her. Nashoba’s dark eyes followed her while she walked over to her friends. Her
eyes were soft green and darting around the room in fear, but she did not cry
out. Her breasts pushed against her apron while she breathed in quick, nervous
breaths. Nashoba could see that his white woman was very frightened. He studied
her, silently staring and letting his eyes travel the length of her body. With
her golden hair, she was much more beautiful than the raven. Nashoba’s cock
thickened and brushed against his breechclout.
He turned to look at
the warriors. He could see their contempt for the raven building in their eyes.
It was far worse for one of alluring looks to seduce a warrior and then rebuke
him. Nashoba knew that the raven had already tried to use her beauty on him.
Her punishment would be severe.
Clara’s voice
quivered slightly when she spoke up, “They are from the east. They are not…”
Clara’s words stuck in her throat when Tocho strode over to her and glared down
at her. She began trembling and trying to shrink into Henry’s protection.
Nashoba stared at
his frightened white woman. “You are travelers.”
His deep voice
broached no argument, and Aubrey wanted to run and hide from the Indian’s gaze.
He kept staring at her with no expression, and she grasped her basket tighter,
the denial frozen in her throat and unable to be spoken. Aubrey could tell by
his eyes that he knew the truth. There was no way this man was going to fall
for an inept attempt at a ruse. A sinking feeling swirled the contents of her
breakfast in her stomach, and seemed to drop it as a solid, cramping lump. She
forgot all the plans she made with Kayla to fight them, kicking, screaming, and
hitting them with heavy wooden bowls.
Oh my god. He’s
huge. Aubrey stared back at the man. He was well over six feet tall, with
rippled bronzed muscles tightened under the skin of his arms and chest. Shining
black hair… as black as his eyes… waved like a sheet down his back and almost
touched the top of his buckskin breechclout. There was not a wasted inch on the
Indian that was not sinewy strength… and there were too many like him, lined up
to block the door.
Tocho gripped
Clara’s chin, forcing her tearing eyes to look up at him. “We were told they
were to head south. You did well, to keep them here,” he said in a low voice.
Clara was quivering, and she had to force herself not to disrespect him and
anger him further by looking away.
She had been both
surprised and terrified when the chief’s son walked in. Even though Tocho and
Nashoba were good friends, Clara had never known Nashoba to join him to collect
travelers. At first, she was afraid he was sent to punish Henry and her. Silently,
she watched him study the captives. When Aubrey walked in, it was obvious why
Nashoba had made the journey with Tocho.
“They don’t know…
all of it. Please, Tocho.” Clara’s voice was a trembling whisper. Pleading with
him was her only option. He knew that she had attempted to lie to them to
protect the travelers.
“I would not have
traded you to someone like the farmer if not for your weakness, Sahkyo.” Tocho
put his hand over the breast with his lion claw. His other hand pushed back her
bonnet, and he sifted strands of her hair between his fingers. Silver mixed with
the chestnut, but she was still pretty and would always belong to him. “Not so
much the Mink any more,” he said quietly. “But, you will always be my Sahkyo,
and I knew you would try to hide them. You will always try to hide them, even
though you know that you can’t.”
Henry had not been
as observant as Clara, and it had not occurred to him why Nashoba had come for
the travelers. “Tocho, it is obvious you want Clara back. I will trade you for
the one with green eyes. She did nothing against the Indians, and Clara disrespected
the tribe. It should be a fair trade.”
Tocho smiled and ran
his thumb down Clara’s cheek. He turned to Henry. “You will have to trade with
the chief’s son. The woman belongs to him.”
Tocho could see the
sadness in Sahkyo’s eyes. He knew that she had never liked living with the
farmer, but he still fought a jealous rage when he thought of Henry sleeping
next to his Mink while his own sleeping furs were empty.
Cici was terrified.
The whole time, a part of her did not believe that Indians would really come
for them. They were big and frighteningly primal… savage. And, they were men.
The panic built as she thought about the Indians taking them away to their village.
No… no… I can’t do this. I might be able to make it at the farm, but not with
savages. “It’s Kayla,” she gasped. Cici pointed across the table. “Kayla is the
one you want, not us.”
“Cici, oh god.”
Aubrey moved to stand in front of Kayla, still holding the basket. She was
shaking. The girls had made a pact not to say which one of them was the cause.
They hoped the Indians would only want the one they felt had wronged the tribe,
and it would screw up whatever plans the savages had for them.
Nashoba
straightened. His white woman had pride and bravery. Her breasts were straining
against the dress while she breathed. They were swelled, nicely firm, with
large nipples poking against her apron. Nashoba stroked his thumb over the pads
of his fingers, imagining how it would feel to be rolling the taut
protuberances and pinching them. How frightened she was, and yet she tried to
protect the raven. Nashoba would teach her how the girl had deceived her, and
she would learn to despise her.
Aubrey felt Kayla’s
fingers grip the back of her skirt, and she could hear her beginning to cry.
Aubrey put the basket on the table and curled her hand when she scooped up the
knife. She pulled her hand to the back as if she were calming Kayla, and tucked
the knife into the tie of her apron.
Aubrey licked her
lips and looked around the room. There was not an inch of fat on any of them,
and as all had their bronzed chests and arms visible this was quite noticeable.
A crazy thought that she was glad they did not have Mohawks went through her head.
They all had long black hair, loose and hanging over their shoulders. Some had
feathers, and some did not. One had three, so she figured he must be the
leader. Other than the one talking to Clara, he was the only one who had
spoken.
Nashoba walked up to
Aubrey and stared down at her. He was a powerfully built man and she began
trembling when she looked up at him. She whimpered when his hand cupped her
chin. Aubrey’s skin sizzled where he touched her, and she smelled an earthy
spice scent mixed with his leather breeches. He was easily the most dangerously
handsome man she had ever seen, and she was alarmed when she felt a clenching
wetness in response to his nearness. It was an involuntary reaction that her
body answered, despite her terror.
Nashoba knew the
wisdom of the spirit guides when he looked down into her eyes. They were not
the bright color of flashing jewels like the raven’s, meant to disrupt and
unsettle a man. They were a soft green like the plants on the prairie. She did
not drop her gaze from his face, even though he could see she was terrified. He
was proud of his woman for trying to be brave, though her fear stirred his
cock, tightening his balls with need.
Nashoba studied her
quivering lips. He imagined them on his shaft, lightly caressing him. His thumb
brushed down her cheek, and she fought the tears filling her eyes. “You are
Wicasa,” he murmured. “Sage.”
Aubrey was frozen
while she stared into his pitch black eyes. They shined with fierce intensity
that seemed both hot with passion and cold with a commitment that her pleading
would be useless. His warm hand released her chin and his arm reached slowly around
her. With a steady movement, Nashoba grabbed Kayla’s arm and he flung her
towards the door.
Kayla screamed, and
Aubrey stepped away from him. Nashoba continued to stare at Aubrey and he
called back, “Tocho?”
Tocho smiled at
Clara. “If you only kept the travelers safe until we arrived, you would not
have to be punished, Sahkyo. But, you try to deceive us, just as you did in
your old spirit world. Don’t you know that travelers cannot be hidden from the
Wehali?” He turned to join the other Indians. Henry put his arm around Clara,
and they waited for the Indian’s punishment.
Kayla was sobbing on
the floor and looking up at the two Indians glaring down at her. “You don’t
understand. I liked Bobby. I gave him so many chances…”
Aubrey’s spell was
finally broken from Nashoba when Kayla screamed. Kayla’s cap had fallen back
when Nashoba tossed her, and an Indian was lifting her to her feet by her long
dark hair. She was shrieking and trying to pry his hand loose.
“You gave a warrior
chances?” Tocho sneered. The girl was petrified, yet she was still using her
tears to try to weaken him. “Your seducing looks will not work for you here. We
know your true face.”
“Oh god,” Kayla
wailed. “Bobby wasn’t a warrior. He was a drug addict who stole from me.”
Aubrey watched in
terror when a savage standing behind Kayla threw a leather noose around her
neck. “No,” she screamed. When she tried to run to her, Nashoba wrapped an arm
under her breasts and he pulled her back against his chest. “This is not your
business, Wacasa. She has disrespected our tribe.”
“No.” Aubrey tried
to twist out of his hold, but he was far too strong. She became increasingly
aware of the raw strength of the muscles surrounding her and pulling her into
the intoxicating scent of him. She felt his other hand move between them, and a
few seconds later he was holding her hidden knife in front of her. Aubrey’s
heart sank and her mind frazzled in greater fear. She knew that her own attempt
to conceal the knife helped to strengthen the Indian’s belief that the women
were not to be believed.
“Tocho, the farmers
gave them weapons.” Nashoba tossed it onto the table.
Cici was still
sitting with her chubby thighs quivering and her knees knocking. “We were
cutting vegetables,” she said quickly, not trying to hide the panic in her
voice. She was afraid she would be in trouble for having a knife in front of
her. The Indians ignored her.
Kayla was struggling
to breathe, and she could feel the man behind her tightening the leather strap
around her neck. The glaring savage in front of her reached around her and
untied the sashes to her apron. It dropped to the floor. Kayla felt his fingers
reach for the buttons on her dress, and she panicked and swept a long leg out
at him. “Get away from me, you son of a bitch.”
Tocho’s fingers
clenched around her breast and she shrieked, still wheezing breath through the
noose. Kayla was getting dizzy, and her few ragged inhales were exhaled in
sobs. There was no way to scream, and it felt as though he was ripping her
breast off. She stopped kicking at him and focused on trying to breathe.
Tocho kept clutching
her breast with one hand while he slipped the buttons open. Kayla was gripping
under the leather strap around her throat, trying to loosen it so she could
breathe. She slipped one hand free and tried to bat the Indian’s hand away while
he pushed the sleeves off her shoulders. The Indian behind her tugged the
leash, and her hand immediately rose to pry the constricting leather away from
her throat.
Tocho took advantage
of the distraction, and he reached behind her to open the button at the top of
the skirt. He pushed the top over her hips, and the raven stood trembling and
naked with the discarded dress and apron pooled around her feet.
Clara turned her
head into Henry’s shirt and cried. “Oh god, Henry. I’m so sorry.” Tocho was
wrong. Clara would turn the travelers away, next time. She could not bear to
watch the Indians claim them, and the punishment to Henry was not worth it.
Henry kept Clara’s face buried in his shirt while his eyes narrowed and he
focused on Kayla. She was everything Clara was not; lithe and firm, a beautiful
young face… and the current object of the warriors’ wrath. Oh, they’ll have
themselves a party with that one.
Kayla screamed again
when the Indian grabbed her hands away from the choking leather. She felt her
knees giving way and a throbbing pain behind her eyes. The Indian had no
trouble securing her wrists tightly. As soon as he released them, she raised
them to her throat and continued to try to loosen the noose. Why is this
happening?
Tocho picked up the
apron, ripped a piece off the bodice and wrapped it over the raven’s mouth. “We
will not listen to more of your insults and lies.”
Finally, the noose
was loosened and Kayla inhaled through flaring nostrils. She was so stunned she
did not even realize she was nude, until she noticed the Indian’s narrowed eyes
fixed on her breasts. Kayla shrieked and twisted when the fierce Indian cupped
her breasts and squeezed harshly. He glared into her swimming blue eyes and
smiled in sadistic triumph.
Kayla felt the
Indian behind her move, and the leather end of the noose slapped down on her
bottom. Tocho reached between her thighs, grasped the loose end and pulled it
up between her legs. He yanked so that the lead cut between the cheeks of her
bottom and smashed against her pussy. Kayla reached out with her bound hands to
grab the strap away from him. Tocho merely raised his fist and pulled the
tether tighter, cutting into her slit and tightening the noose around her
throat again.
Kayla’s frightened
gaze searched the room, stopping on the farmers. Help me. Why aren’t you doing
something to stop them? Henry had his chin on Clara’s head, and his eyes were
focused on where the tether was splitting Kayla’s pussy lips open.
Kayla felt her lungs
burning, and she looked up at Tocho, pleading with her eyes. Tocho stared
patiently, waiting for the raven to figure it out. If she struggled, she would
have a very painful journey to the village. Kayla’s hands rose again to her
throat to loosen the noose, while she gasped hitching sobs. She finally lowered
her bound wrists, and the Indian immediately let the leash go slack.
Aubrey was
continuing to struggle in Nashoba’s arms, screaming for the Indians to release
Kayla. “Let her go. She didn’t do anything.” Aubrey felt fingers thread through
her hair and pull her head back.
Nashoba leaned down,
and said, “Silence, Wacasa.”
Aubrey felt the hand
clutching her hair loosen and drop to the neck sash of the apron. The white top
fell down onto the skirt. The strong arm he had wrapped under her breasts
tightened when the belt was pulled free and the apron slipped to the floor. When
his hands reached for the buttons at her throat, Aubrey thrashed and tried to
pry his arm loose. “Let go of me,” she cried. She could see one of the Indians
walking Kayla outside, leading her by the strap threaded between her legs.
“We allow nothing of
the white man in our village,” Nashoba said.
“But I am white,”
Aubrey cried. Oh god. This can’t be happening.
“You are neither
white, nor Indian. You are mine,” Nashoba stated. “Put your hands down,
Wacasa.” He turned to Clara. “Tell her who I am, Sahkyo.”
Clara stared at
Nashoba. Even after all these years she could never forget the powerful man.
“He is Nashoba, the Wolf. He is the chief’s oldest son.”
Nashoba’s black gaze
fixed on her. “You remember me.” He dropped his stare and rubbed Aubrey’s
temple with his chin, inhaling her scent.
Clara looked into
Aubrey’s terrified eyes. “He owns you now.”
REVIEWS
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5.0 out of 5 stars A sprawling, ambitious erotic romance
January 8, 2012
By Critical
Mass
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What if there were a
world separate from ours, a spirit world with an alternate history differing
from our own? What if a select few had the power to cross over into this world
- or cause others to cross over? This is one of the central themes of this dark,
ambitious erotic adventure. A group of young women find themselves stranded in
a world much like our own, yet with serious, terrifying differences. In this
spirit world, the Indian Wars of the American plains appear to have either not
been fought, or the victors turned out to be much different than those of our
official known history. The story follows the efforts of these stranded women
to get back home, and in the meantime, adapt to life in a land strictly
controlled by the Wehali tribe.
This fascinating
premise serves as the backdrop for this capture/non-consent erotic romance. The
setting allows the author to explore the erotic possibilities of a Native
American dominated West that other stories merely hint at. The author's
exploration of these possibilities is well written, hot, and occasionally
disturbing. Like several of Ms. Smith's other stories, the villains in Captive
Travelers are sometimes difficult to pin down, with mysterious, ambiguous
motivations. This fact allows the reader a chance to "fill in the
blanks" somewhat, and is a sign of a writer comfortable with her plot and
narrative.
The sexual content
of the story is very graphic and explicit; no purple prose here! You'll find
yourself looking up more than one Native American word in this one, and either
blushing or cringing at their definitions:) The excellent prologue probably has
the harshest of the sexual content, so a potential reader who likes the
prologue will not be put off by the content in the rest of the book. As in much
of Ms. Smith's darker BDSM erotica, there is in addition to plenty of M/F sex,
quite a bit of F/F interaction as well, some of it quite harsh. There is some
whipping, spanking, humiliation and even some dehumanization. However,
considering what really sometimes happened to captives of Native American
tribes, the content here is nowhere near as grim as "real life". It
should be noted that this is first and foremost a capture/non-consent tale, so
those readers averse to such themes may not be comfortable with this one. For
those that enjoy this particular genre, the capture scenes in this story are
masterpieces, fair crackling with sexual tension; alone these scenes are easily
worth the price of admission. For those readers looking for HEA/HFN, but who
are not fans of capture/non-con, there is something for them as well if they
can stick around through the darker content.
Adventurous erotic
romance readers looking for an unconventional setting, evocative description,
gripping action, and sizzling sexuality, will find Captive Travelers to be a
most interesting read. Enjoy!